Being the month of love and with Valentines Day right around the corner, I recently made a song/poem of which I transcribed in Sindarin because why not (plus in my humble opinion, I think it's a much more romantic language that the literal Romance languages). It's a one verse long, eight lined song of free verse. Currently it is unfinished but I was hoping that the community could help me translate and fix it a bit. I'm calling it "The One I Call Mine" and if you want to use it for something, feel free to just copy and paste! Anyways, here is what I got in English:
O the songs sing of her grace,
For she is the star of my eyes.
More beautiful than any elf,
My love for her never falters.
O the songs sing of her beauty,
That no one can ever compare.
For she is the one I call my own,
The bearer of my heart.
Here is my unfinished translation:
A in glîr lennar od i vess dîn,
An e i el od i chent nîn.
I vainas dîn athan i vainas Edhel,
I veleth nîn anest ú-dewatha
In glîr lennar od i vainas dîn,
After that line, I couldn't find anyway to express the "mine" part without butchering the entire sentence up into unintelligible nonsense.
Galu! I’m a little out of practice (ahem… maybe a little more than a little…) but maybe I can help. Is this the sentence you’re having trouble with? “For she is the one I call my own,” I can’t figure out the “For”, but maybe this is a little bit close.
Naw i ben iallon i în nîn
I would definitely check with someone else, though. I hope this helps at least a little bit. It's a lovely poem, by the way!
Amy: Hello! I am confused about the verb nautha-. In lesson 17 the dialog at the start has “nauthog” for “you think”, then “semin” for “I think”. Is nautha- one of the irregular verbs? I can’t find anything else it in the lessons or dictionary. Thank you!
Jul 12, 2020 2:56:39 GMT
Xandarien: Suilad! There have been two verbs used for 'to think', I apologise for the confusion. There's Nautha- 'to conceive an idea, think' and Sam- 'to think. Sam- should have been removed everywhere as it was a reconstruction that we don't need. I'll change that.
Jul 13, 2020 8:47:43 GMT
Amy: Thank you! I really enjoy the lessons. Len hannon!
Jul 14, 2020 2:16:08 GMT